托福写作这十个内容你留意到了吗

为了更好地帮助大伙儿高效率复习toefl，下边我为大伙儿提供*须留意的10个內容，期待对大伙儿有一定的帮助。本人的心里都不甘平凡，不肯倒退，不愿落伍，假如能越来越更为出色，你要一如既往英勇争得，
1.用词不当
学员们写的作文里多多少少都是会有一些用词不当的难题，可是要留意的是一些基础的不正确是不能犯的。 In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize. ——problems应改成questions
2.语法错误
这儿的语法错误并不是指在考試情况下的误打，只是自身对语汇拼读记忆力的不正确。 In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. ——judgement应改成judgment
3.滥用长尾词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness. 这儿的gingerliness压根是不明就里。该语句也有下列难题： 1)该作文题目是讲学员是不是应当兼职工作，因而children的出現就看起来很无缘无故; 2)although和but是不可以并用的; 3)代指未知，they不清楚是代指前边的哪些;
4.表述新中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation. 语句中划线一部分的表述过度新中式化。
5.表意文字反复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends. 前边早已提及了盆友，后边又提及盆友。 The show is so compelling but attractive. compelling和attractive是近义词，因此 这儿那么写就要人搞不懂。 6.固定不动使用方法不正确 To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge. ——To some extends应改成To some extent
7.例子浮夸
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death. 尽管善良的谎言是必需的，可是其作用显而易见沒有这么大。
8.成份不必要
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs. 该句中的shows that是不必要的成份。

9.词性错乱
However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly. 语句中的privacy和embarrassingly应当改为private和embarrassing。
10.语态不正确
toefl大作文一般应用如今语态，除开拿以往恶性事件做为事例用过去时态。 Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation. —— claimed应当改成claim 。