托福写作如何提高评分

为了更好地协助大伙儿高效率复习toefl，我为大伙儿产生怎样防止失分，期待对大伙儿有一定的帮助。
提议一： 防止裂缝的英语单词和短语
1. 在托福写作中，一些裂缝的英语单词或短语压根不可以为语句产生一切有关的或关键的信息内容，彻底能够被删除。例如下边的语句：
When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfying lives than those of their parents, in my opinion.
他们之中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都看起来不必要。彻底能够除掉。
改成Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents.
2. 一些裂缝和繁杂的表达形式能够开展更换，比如：
Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time.
“due to the fact that”便是一个很典型性的繁杂的表达形式的事例，能够更换，简单化为下边的表达形式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now.
提议二： 防止反复
1. 在托福写作中，尽量减少多次重复使用一样的语汇。或是有的情况下尽管语汇沒有反复，但含意却有反复。此刻能够做一些简单化的工作中。比如下边这一事例：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size.
large 对一个farm而言便是size层面的large，因此 in size能够除掉，改成：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large.
更简约的表达形式为：My grandfather grew up on a large farm.
2. 有时候一个短语可以用一个更简单的单词来更换，比如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on his parents' farm.
这儿的over and over again就可以改成repeatedly，看起来更加简约：My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents' farm.